Hi! I'm glad you liked my arts. About your story ... I'll be pleasure to read it, but it is unlikely to be able to evaluate, because of my knowledge of English is not enough to understand, how high your artistic level. It seems as if I asked you to rate my stories, written in Russian
I am sure that judging team of competition in which you are going to participate, will be much more competent than I am. You should not be afraid to send your stories. Then you will get a comprehensive answer to your question.